Saturday, June 7, 2014

English Language Proficiency I (WAJ3022) Topic 3- Types of Sentences


















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  1. Dear students,
    Write a paragraph of about 200 words which consists of the 3 types of sentences. Analyse the types of sentences and label them.

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    1. One day when I was on the way back home, I saw a group of children playing football at the field (complex sentences). The scene was recalling the day when I was still a child (simple sentences). I used to play football with my friends every evening yet never missed for one day (compound sentences). Things are not always going well and smooth for everyone (simple sentences). There was an accident happening one day (simple sentences). When Sam and I were passing the ball to each other, suddenly the ball kicked out to the road (complex sentences). Without any hesitation, Sam ran to the ball (complex sentences). At the same time, there was a car passing by and the car had knocked him down (complex sentences). Everyone was in fear at the moment as Sam’s body was full of blood (complex sentences). The driver called for the ambulance in seconds (simple sentences). Luckily, Sam was saved at the end (complex sentences). Since the day, our parents not allow us to play football anymore (complex sentences). What we can do is just homework and housework (compound sentences). After I got my car license, I swore to be more careful when driving (complex sentences). I also advise others to be more careful when passing the road or even driving on the highway to avoid such accident happened to others again (complex sentences).

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    2. One day when I was on the way back home, I saw a group of children playing football at the field (complex sentence). ✓

      The scene was recalling the day when I was still a child (simple sentence). ✓ but change to 'The scene was recalled to...'

      I used to play football with my friends every evening yet never missed for one day (compound sentence). ✓

      Things are not always going well and smooth for everyone (simple sentence). ✓

      There was an accident happening one day (simple sentence). ✓ but change to 'happened'

      When Sam and I were passing the ball to each other, suddenly the ball kicked out to the road (complex sentence). ✓

      Without any hesitation, Sam ran to the ball (complex sentence). ✘

      At the same time, there was a car passing by and the car had knocked him down (complex sentence). ✘

      Everyone was in fear at the moment as Sam’s body was full of blood (complex sentence). ✓

      The driver called for the ambulance in seconds (simple sentence).✓

      Luckily, Sam was saved at the end (complex sentence). ✘

      Since the day, our parents do not allow us to play football anymore (complex sentence). ✘

      What we can do are just homework and housework (compound sentences). ✘

      After I got my car license, I swore to be more careful when driving (complex sentence). ✓

      I also advise others to be more careful when passing the road or even driving on the highway to avoid such accident happened to others again (complex sentence).✓

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  2. Adriana is a young, cute girl.(Simple Sentences) Sim and Adriana are best friend but they are always silent on the class.(Compound Sentences)When Mary was sicked, Sim take care of Mary until She recovered.(Cpmlex Sentences).The exam is around the corner.(Simple Sentences). Adriana and Sim are planned to study in library.Because Adriana and Sim arrived at the bus stand lately,so they are forced to walk to the library.(Complex Sentences).The weather is too hot.Adriana invited Sim to have a "cool blog" but Sim rejected.(Compound Sentence).After 30 minutes, Adriana and Sim arrived at a T-junction.While they waited the traffic light to turn red, thay saw a serius accident.(Complex Sentences).Adriana suggested Sim to help the injured olad man but Soim fainted when she saw the red blood.(Complex Sentences).So, Adriana decided to help the old man.When Sim is awaken, the time is shown 5.30 pm.(complex sentences).Adriana laughed at Sim for her coward act.(Simple sentences).At the end, Adriana called taxi and bring them home.(Compound sentences)

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    1. Adriana is a young, cute girl.(Simple Sentence) ✓, ...but cute, young...

      Sim and Adriana are best friend but they are always silent on the class.(Compound Sentence) ✓

      When Mary was sicked, Sim take care of Mary until She recovered.(Complex Sentence). ✓ but it contains grammatical errors.

      The exam is around the corner.(Simple Sentence). ✓ but change to examination

      Adriana and Sim are planned to study in library. ?

      Because Adriana and Sim arrived at the bus stand lately,so they are forced to walk to the library.(Complex Sentence).✘ and with grammatical errors

      The weather is too hot. ?

      Adriana invited Sim to have a "cool blog" but Sim rejected.(Compound Sentence).✓

      After 30 minutes, Adriana and Sim arrived at a T-junction.?

      While they waited the traffic light to turn red, thay saw a serius accident.(Complex Sentence). ✓ but with spelling errors

      Adriana suggested Sim to help the injured olad man but Soim fainted when she saw the red blood.(Complex Sentence). ✓ but with spelling errors

      So, Adriana decided to help the old man.?

      When Sim is awaken, the time is shown 5.30 pm.(complex sentence).✓ but with grammatical errors

      Adriana laughed at Sim for her coward act.(Simple sentence).✓

      At the end, Adriana called taxi and bring them home.(Compound sentence) ✘

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  3. Because I had already tired with the hectic life in Australia, I decided to start the new page of my life in Malaysia. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) Malaysia is a strategic country because it locates at the equator of the earth. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) Malaysia has many forests, rare animals and rare plants. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) It’s suitable to carry out research also as I am taking a part time course of PhD. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) With the presence of those rare species and my deep interest in botany, I think I will enjoy this new life very much.(COMPLEX SENTENCE) Besides, Malaysia is also a unique country.(SIMPLE SENTENCE) Malaysia is a multiracial country.(SIMPLE SENTENCE) All the races such as Malays, Chineses, Indians, Ibans, Kadazans and so on live happily on the same piece of land. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) As a result, Malaysia is highly richs in cultural and tradition.(COMPOUND SENTENCE) I have set a target for myself.(COMPOUND SENTENCE) I want learn to cook at least ten types of tradition dishes within 2 years.(COMMPLEX SENTENCE) I know this is quite hard for me because I am not talented in cooking at all. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) I will not give up to learn in Malaysia. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) I am looking forward to my new life.(SIMPLE SENTENCE) Malaysia, wait me. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) I will be coming and reaching in two month’s time.(COMPOUND SENTENCE) It’s time to create new memories. (SIMPLE SENTENCE)

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    1. Because I had already tired with the hectic life in Australia, I decided to start the new page of my life in Malaysia. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) Malaysia is a strategic country as it locates at the equator of the earth. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) Malaysia has many forests, rare animals and rare plants. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) It’s suitable to carry out research also as I am taking a part time course of PhD. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) With the presence of those rare species and my deep interest in botany, I think I will enjoy this new life very much. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) Besides, Malaysia is a unique country too.(SIMPLE SENTENCE) Malaysia is a multiracial country which has Malays, Chineses, Indians, Ibans, Kadazans and so on. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) All the races live happily on the same piece of land. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) As a result, Malaysia is highly richs in cultural and tradition. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) I have set a target for myself.(SIMPLE SENTENCE) I want learn to cook at least ten types of tradition dishes within 2 years.(SIMPLE SENTENCE) I know this is quite hard for me because I am not talented in cooking at all. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) Not matter how, I will never give up. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) I am looking forward to my new life. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) Malaysia, wait me. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) I will be coming and reaching in two month’s time.(SIMPLE SENTENCE) It’s time for me to create new memories. (SIMPLE SENTENCE)

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    2. Because I had already tired with the hectic life in Australia, I decided to start the new page of my life in Malaysia. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓ but change to I was

      Malaysia is a strategic country because it locates at the equator of the earth. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓ but change to it is located

      Malaysia has many forests, rare animals and rare plants. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      It’s suitable to carry out research also as I am taking a part time course of PhD. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓

      With the presence of those rare species and my deep interest in botany, I think I will enjoy this new life very much.(COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✘

      Besides, Malaysia is also a unique country.(SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      Malaysia is a multiracial country.(SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      All the races such as Malays, Chinese, Indians, Ibans, Kadazans and so on live happily on the same piece of land. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      As a result, Malaysia is highly rich in cultural and tradition.(COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      I have set a target for myself.(COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      I want learn to cook at least ten types of tradition dishes within 2 years.(COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✘

      I know this is quite hard for me because I am not talented in cooking at all. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓

      I will not give up to learn in Malaysia. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      I am looking forward to my new life.(SIMPLE SENTENCE) Malaysia, wait me. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✘ and change to wait for me

      I will be coming and reaching in two month’s time.(COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      It’s time to create new memories. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

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  4. My mother is the most important person in my life. (simple sentence) Many people have come and passed but she keeps by my side helping me on all the important values of a good life. (compound sentence)She diligently takes care of our family while still running her business. (complex sentence)She has shown us that with hard work and determination anything is possible.(complex sentence) My mother is patient.(simple sentence)She does not give up until sees the results.(complex sentence) My mother runs several successful businesses and she is able to juggle between her business and taking care of us.(compound sentence) My mother and I are close and I normally go to her for advice.(compound sentence) She has taught me a lot and has helped me become a better person in life.(simple sentence) She is a strong woman.(simple sentence)I remember a time when some burglars broke into one of her business and made away with almost everything.(complex sentence) That burglars did not deter her.(simple sentence) She restocked and continued as nothing had happened.(complex sentence) She does not put any pressure on me but she walks with me in every step to ensure that I am in the right path towards achieving my goals.(compound sentence). My mother has taught me so much and I will always be grateful for her.(compound sentence)

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    1. My mother is the most important person in my life. (simple sentence)✓

      Many people have come and passed but she keeps by my side helping me on all the important values of a good life. (compound sentence) ✓ but with missing words

      She diligently takes care of our family while still running her business. (complex sentence) ✓

      She has shown us that with hard work and determination anything is possible.(complex sentence) ✓

      My mother is patient.(simple sentence) ✓

      She does not give up until sees the results.(complex sentence) ✓

      My mother runs several successful businesses and she is able to juggle between her business and taking care of us.(compound sentence) ✓

      My mother and I are close and I normally go to her for advice.(compound sentence) ✓

      She has taught me a lot and has helped me become a better person in life.(simple sentence) ✓

      She is a strong woman.(simple sentence) ✓

      I remember a time when some burglars broke into one of her business and made away with almost everything.(complex sentence) ✓

      That burglars did not deter her.(simple sentence) ✓

      She restocked and continued as nothing had happened.(complex sentence) ✘

      She does not put any pressure on me but she walks with me in every step to ensure that I am in the right path towards achieving my goals.(compound sentence). ✘

      My mother has taught me so much and I will always be grateful for her.(compound sentence) ✓

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  5. Loo Kiu Boon is my best friend (Simple Sentence). She is studying at IPGK Raja Melewar Seremban now. I meet her since I’m in Form 1 secondary school (Simple Sentence). In my opinion, a true friend is someone who never leaves us when we are in trouble and can share their pains to each other (Compound Sentence). On the contrary, a friend who cannot help us in trouble nor values to be our friend. She helps me more than I help her (Simple Sentence). Although we studying at different IPG now, but we still keep in touch with each other (Compound-Complex Sentence). She always help me in studies when I got problem in assignments (Complex Sentence). A true friend always give us time and makes us happy in order to forget our worries (Compound Sentence). She knows all of the good and bad things about me but she still by my side (Compound Sentence). She makes me feel that she just like my family (Simple Sentence). We can choose our friends by ourselves, but we cannot choose our family (Compound Sentence). Friendship is very precious (Simple Sentence). So, I always treasure my friend and love her like I do with my siblings (Compound Sentence). I really thankful that I able to have her in my friends list (Simple Sentence). Friendship is the greatest gift of my life and I received it (Compound Sentence).

    Mary Sek Jing Wen
    PISMP BC SK Ambilan Jun 2014

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    1. Loo Kiu Boon is my best friend (Simple Sentence). ✓

      She is studying at IPGK Raja Melewar Seremban now. ?

      I meet her since I’m in Form 1 in secondary school (Simple Sentence). ✓

      In my opinion, a true friend is someone who never leaves us when we are in trouble and can share their pains to each other (Compound Sentence). ✘

      On the contrary, a friend who cannot help us in trouble nor values to be our friend. ?

      She helps me more than I help her (Simple Sentence). ✘

      Although we studying at different IPG now, we still keep in touch with each other (Compound-Complex Sentence). ✘

      She always help me in studies when I got problem in assignments (Complex Sentence). ✓

      A true friend always gives us time and makes us happy in order to forget our worries (Compound Sentence). ✘

      She knows all of the good and bad things about me but she is still by my side (Compound Sentence). ✓

      She makes me feel that she just like my family (Simple Sentence). ✘ and with grammatical errors

      We can choose our friends by ourselves, but we cannot choose our family (Compound Sentence). ✓

      Friendship is very precious (Simple Sentence). ✓

      So, I always treasure my friend and love her like I do with my siblings (Compound Sentence). ✘ and with grammatical errors

      I really thankful that I able to have her in my friends list (Simple Sentence). ✘ and with grammatical errors

      Friendship is the greatest gift of my life and I received it (Compound Sentence).✘ and with grammatical errors

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  6. Our mother earth is a beautiful and unique planet in this universe which consists of living things and non-living things such as mountains, sea, rivers, forests and various natural resources. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) At first, the earth was clean, quiet and without any pollutions. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) Everything had been changed when mankind started to taking benefits from the lovely land. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) Our environment is polluted now. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) Some people in this earth have to breathe in the polluted air and drink the polluted water even though this will lead to many diseases because they have no choice. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) Human’s activity such as deforestation, urbanization and industrialization also will cause global warming. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) The temperature of the environment is getting higher and higher now. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) The melting ice in artic also will cause the rising of sea level. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) The mother earth is “warning” us now. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) She is sick and calling for our protection now. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) Our mother earth will be getting worse day by day unless we find some way to save her. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) There are many ways we can make a difference such as recycling, stop deforestation, reduce the uses petroleum, tree planting, campaign and so on. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) Every human on the earth has the responsibility to rescue our mother earth from danger because we are also saving our own life at the same time. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) Without a “healthy” mother earth, our life will be torturing. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) We only have one precious earth, so let’s work together to make a difference! (COMPOUND SENTENCE)

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    1. Our mother earth is a beautiful and unique planet in this universe which consists of living things and non-living things such as mountains, sea, rivers, forests and various natural resources. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      At first, the earth was clean, quiet and without any pollutions. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      Everything had been changed when mankind started to taking benefits from the lovely land. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓

      Our environment is polluted now. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      Some people in this earth have to breathe in the polluted air and drink the polluted water even though this will lead to many diseases because they have no choice. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓

      Human’s activity such as deforestation, urbanization and industrialization also will cause global warming. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      The temperature of the environment is getting higher and higher now. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      The melting ice in artic also will cause the rising of sea level. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      The mother earth is “warning” us now. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      She is sick and calling for our protection now. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      Our mother earth will be getting worse day by day unless we find some way to save her. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓

      There are many ways we can make a difference such as recycling, stop deforestation, reduce the uses petroleum, tree planting, campaign and so on. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      Every human on the earth has the responsibility to rescue our mother earth from danger because we are also saving our own life at the same time. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓

      Without a “healthy” mother earth, our life will be torturing. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      We only have one precious earth, so let’s work together to make a difference! (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✓

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  7. I have a happy family. (simple sentences) My family love me and always give a support to me . (compound sentences) I still remembered the moment my parent teach me ABC with full of kind and love since I was small. (complete sentences) When I enter the primary school,my parent teach me to be independent. (simple sentences) Every morning,my mother took my sister and I go to school for study. (compound sentences) At school,I have a big responsible to take care of my sister because I was a eldest in my family. (complete sentences) It make me know how to be a good sister . (simple sentences) Everytime my sister din’t understand in homework, I will help her or teach her to solve the problem. (compound sentences)Otherwise,I will make sure my school bag is finish packed before I go to sleep every night . (complete sentences) Sometime,my parent will bring us go to travel during holiday. (simple sentences) Last weekend,We travel to bangkok and took many picture with beautiful scenery. (compound sentences)We alsobuy some sourvenirs to friend or relatives when we reach a touristism places. (complete sentences)I love my family very much. (simple sentences)I will make sure I study hard so that my parent proud to me one day. (compound sentences)I want to be a good teacher while I was graduate after 4 years. (complete sentences)

    CHUA XUE YAN
    PISMP AMBILAN JUN 2014 BC(Sk)




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    1. I have a happy family. (simple sentence) ✓

      My family love me and always give a support to me . (compound sentence) ✘

      I still remembered the moment my parents teach me ABC with full of kind and love since I was small. (complete sentence) ✘

      When I enter the primary school,my parent teach me to be independent. (simple sentence) ✘

      Every morning,my mother took my sister and I go to school for study. (compound sentence) ✘

      At school,I have a big responsible to take care of my sister because I was a eldest in my family. (complete sentence) ✘

      It makes me know how to be a good sister . (simple sentence) ✓

      Every time my sister didn’t understand in homework, I will help her or teach her to solve the problem. (compound sentence) ✘

      Otherwise,I will make sure my school bag is finish packed before I go to sleep every night . (complete sentence) ✘

      Sometime,my parent will bring us go to travel during holiday. (simple sentence) ✓ but with grammatical errors

      Last weekend,We travel to bangkok and took many picture with beautiful scenery. (compound sentence) ✘

      We alsobuy some sourvenirs to friend or relatives when we reach a touristism places. (complete sentence) ✘

      I love my family very much. (simple sentence) ✓

      I will make sure I study hard so that my parent proud to me one day. (compound sentence) ✘

      I want to be a good teacher while I was graduate after 4 years. (complete sentence) ✘

      Dear Xue Yan,
      There are many grammatical errors in your writing. Please improve your Grammar by doing more grammar exercises.

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  8. Nowadays, issue of pollution becomes more serious in our country. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) Pollution is an issue that we should be very concern as we live in this modern world. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) There are many types of pollution, namely air, water and noise. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) Pollution will cause many changes to us which will affect our normal lifestyles. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) Pollution will disturb our ecosystem and the balance in our environment. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) Pollution will also cause the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere increase. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) This will disturb the plants from doing their photosynthesis. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) Besides, pollution will also cause the acid rain. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) Pollution will also affect the the human health which will lead to many health problems such as asthma, lung cancer, respiratory disease, skin irritations and so on. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) Nevertheless, pollution also cause the global warming and this will lead to the melting of polar ice caps which will increase the sea level and cause the danger for the people living near the coastal areas. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) Pollution will bring many disadvantages to us. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) Thus, some effective ways must be carried out immediately in order to save our earth. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) The ways that we can do including authorities must penalize individuals or organizations who have been found polluting the environment. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) The school authorities should also introduce the environmental education to school children. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) The government must also implement a more effective campaign in order to save our earth. (COMPLEX SENTENCE)

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    1. Nowadays, issue of pollution becomes more serious in our country. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✘

      Pollution is an issue that we should be very concerned of as we live in this modern world. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓

      There are many types of pollution, namely air, water and noise. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      Pollution will cause many changes to us which will affect our normal lifestyles. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      Pollution will disturb our ecosystem and the balance in our environment. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      Pollution will also cause the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere increase. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      This will disturb the plants from doing their photosynthesis. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      Besides, pollution will also cause the acid rain. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      Pollution will also affect the the human health which will lead to many health problems such as asthma, lung cancer, respiratory disease, skin irritations and so on. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓

      Nevertheless, pollution also cause the global warming and this will lead to the melting of polar ice caps which will increase the sea level and cause the danger for the people living near the coastal areas. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓

      Pollution will bring many disadvantages to us. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      Thus, some effective ways must be carried out immediately in order to save our earth. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✘

      The ways that we can do including authorities must penalize individuals or organizations who have been found polluting the environment. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓

      The school authorities should also introduce the environmental education to school children. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      The government must also implement a more effective campaign in order to save our earth. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✘

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  9. Do you have a best friend?(simple sentence) yes, I have. (simple sentence) My best friend is Cassandra Cheah. (simple sentence). She has a good smile, big eyes and a long curly hair.(compound sentence). Besides that, she is a tall girl, who stood at 1.7 meters. (compound sentence)She is same age as me.(simple sentence)Maybe because of that, we get closer easily compared to the other. (complex sentence)We had a lot in common and we will spent time together during the weekends. (compound sentence). In addition, Cassandra is very good at his lessons. (simple sentence) She never gives the teacher a chance to complaint (simple sentence) She also a responsible person.(simple sentence) This is because she can manage the time very well and everything is in her schedule although she need to help her mum to take care her younger sister.(complex sentence) . Moreover, when I have problem, she will give me some advices and help me to solve the problem .(complex sentence) Even when I don’t understand in the lesson she will explained patiently for me.( complex sentence) In the end, I think I’m really lucky that I have met Cassandra and I’m very happy because we are friend and I think we will be friend forever.(complex sentence)

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    1. Do you have a best friend?(simple sentence) ✓

      Yes, I have. (simple sentence) ✓

      My best friend is Cassandra Cheah. (simple sentence). ✓

      She has a good smile, big eyes and a long curly hair.(compound sentence). ✘

      Besides, she is a tall girl, who stood at 1.7 meters. (compound sentence) ✘

      She is of same age as me.(simple sentence) ✓

      Maybe because of that, we get closer easily compared to each other. (complex sentence) ✘

      We had a lot in common and we will spent time together during the weekends. (compound sentence). ✓

      In addition, Cassandra is very good at his lessons. (simple sentence) ✓

      She never gives the teacher a chance to complain (simple sentence) ✓

      She also is a responsible person.(simple sentence) ✓

      This is because she can manage the time very well and everything is in her schedule although she need to help her mum to take care her younger sister.(complex sentence) . ✓

      Moreover, when I have problem, she will give me some advices and help me to solve the problem .(complex sentence) ✓

      Even when I don’t understand in the lesson she will explained patiently for me.( complex sentence) ✓

      In the end, I think I’m really lucky that I have met Cassandra and I’m very happy because we are friend and I think we will be friend forever.(complex sentence) ✓

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  10. Nowadays we can aspect to find at least one television set each.(SIMPLE) A television set is no longer a luxury, it has become a common part of living, but since its appearance, television has brought to man many advantages as well as disadvantages.(COMPLEX)The advantages of television are many.(SIMPLE) News that took months to travel from one place to another now takes just a fraction of a second, and minus the distorting factor of human messengers. (COMPLEX)The impacts of this improved communication on our lives are great indeed. (SIMPLE)Television keeps us informed about all the current affairs in the world. (SIMPLE) Television helps us in broadening our knowledge in many ways. (SIMPLE) Through language teaching programs in television, we can learn the language of others country that we like such as: English, French, Malay, Chinese, Korean and so on. (COMPLEX) Apart from its advantages, television also brings disadvantages to us. (COMPOUND) Television will make people addicted to it and gradually become passive in their action. (COMPOUND) Beside, television prevents us from communicating with each other. (COMPOUND) Instead of watching television, we may spend the time with our family. (COMPOUND) Without the distraction of television, we may sit around together after dinner and talk to one another to know each other better.(COMPLEX)

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    1. CORRECTION:
      Nowadays we can aspect to find at least one television set each. (SIMPLE) A television set is no longer a luxury , it has become a common part of living. (COMPOUND) But since its appearance, television has brought to man many advantages as well as disadvantages.(COMPLEX)The advantages of television are many.(SIMPLE) News that took months to travel from one place to another now takes just a fraction of a second, and minus the distorting factor of human messengers. (COMPOUND)The impacts of this improved communication on our lives are great indeed. (SIMPLE)Television keeps us informed about all the current affairs in the world. (SIMPLE) Television helps us in broadening our knowledge in many ways. (SIMPLE) Through language teaching programs in television, we can learn the language of others country that we like such as: English, French, Malay, Chinese, Korean and so on. (COMPLEX) Apart from its advantages, television also brings disadvantages to us. (COMPLEX) Television will make people addicted to it and gradually become passive in their action. (SIMPLE) Beside, television prevents us from communicating with each other. (SIMPLE) Instead of watching television, we may spend the time with our family. (SIMPLE) Without the distraction of television, we may sit around together after dinner and talk to one another to know each other better.(COMPOUND)

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    2. Nowadays we can expect to find at least one television set each in a family. (SIMPLE) ✓

      A television set is no longer a luxury , it has become a common part of living. (COMPOUND) ✓

      But since its appearance, television has brought to man many advantages as well as disadvantages.(COMPLEX) ✘

      The advantages of television are many.(SIMPLE) ✓

      News that took months to travel from one place to another now takes just a fraction of a second, and minus the distorting factor of human messengers. (COMPOUND)✘

      The impacts of this improved communication on our lives are great indeed. (SIMPLE)✓

      Television keeps us informed about all the current affairs in the world. (SIMPLE) ✓

      Television helps us in broadening our knowledge in many ways. (SIMPLE) ✓

      Through language teaching programmes in television, we can learn the language of others country that we like such as English, French, Malay, Chinese, Korean and so on. (COMPLEX) ✓

      Apart from its advantages, television also brings disadvantages to us. (COMPLEX) ✘

      Television will make people addicted to it and gradually become passive in their action. (SIMPLE) ✓

      Besides, television prevents us from communicating with each other. (SIMPLE) ✓

      Instead of watching television, we may spend the time with our family.(SIMPLE) ✓

      Without the distraction of television, we may sit around together after dinner and talk to one another to know each other better.(COMPOUND) ✘

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  11. Who am I? (SIMPLE SENTENCE) I have always believed that only after everything external has been taken away is the left person the real me. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) Then what are left are simply my heart and my mind. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) I can't paint not given a brush, yet I have developed the talent to recognize true beauty. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) I could no longer play the piano without a keyboard, but I am still moved to tears when hearing a piece of melting work. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) Although I will not be considered pretty anymore when standing in front of a stone-age tribe, I know I will receive their smiles because in my eyes that shine of kindness would never fade. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) Looking inward, I observe love and cares, grief and joy, queries and awakenings, interests and passion, dreams and wills. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) The love is given not just to family but also to mankind. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) He cares are both for the beloved and those in need. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) I regard pain the exact way I cherish mirth. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) I think and learn to discover truths as wide as the universe, as deep as people's souls. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) All that I am striving for is an eventual harmony in the internal me as well as the external world. (COMPLEX SENTENCE)

    BY LIAN SHUNYEE
    PISMP BC(SK) SEM1

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    1. Who am I? (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      I have always believed that only after everything external has been taken away is the left person the real me. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓

      Then what are left are simply my heart and my mind. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      I can't paint not given a brush, yet I have developed the talent to recognize true beauty. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✓

      I could no longer play the piano without a keyboard, but I am still moved to tears when hearing a piece of melting work. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✓

      Although I will not be considered pretty anymore when standing in front of a stone-age tribe, I know I will receive their smiles because in my eyes that shine of kindness would never fade. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓

      Looking inward, I observe love and cares, grief and joy, queries and awakenings, interests and passion, dreams and wills. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      The love is given not just to family but also to mankind. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      He cares are both for the beloved and those in need. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      I regard pain the exact way I cherish mirth. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✘

      I think and learn to discover truths as wide as the universe, as deep as people's souls. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✘

      All that I am striving for is an eventual harmony in the internal me as well as the external world. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✘

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  12. Penang is a wonderful place at Peninsular Malaysia and known as Pearl of Orient. (COMPOUND) Before this, I just heard from my friends that Penang Island is an interesting place. (COMPLEX) Therefore, I want to see with my own eyes. (COMPOUND) I went there with my family for three days during last school holiday. (COMPOUND) One of the most tourist attraction in Penang is Penang Bridge. (SIMPLE) We can see that it is the longest bridge in Asia country. (SIMPLE) Then, we continued our journey to Penang Hill. (COMPOUND) Penang Hill is the most popular with funicular railway. (SIMPLE) I was so excited to try the funicular railway because I never tried it. (COMPLEX) On the next day, we visit the Botanical Garden. (COMPLEX) We saw a lot of monkey in Botanical Garden. (SIMPLE) The monkey is not kept in the cage but they roam freely. (COMPOUND) But we cannot give foods to them because it can harm us. (COMPOUND) Then, we went to the butterfly farm. (COMPOUND) There, we can see many kind of butterflies and their species. (COMPOUND) After that, I was really excited especially during lunch time. (COMPLEX) Because we know that Malaysia has many races and we can find variety of foods from there races. (COMPOUND) In Penang, we can find Malays, Indians and Chinese food but the most popular food in Penang is 'Nasi Kandar' and 'Laksa'. (COMPOUND) All these foods are delicious, cheap and easy to find. (COMPOUND) As a conclusion, Penang Island is the most interesting place at Peninsular Malaysia and it's good to release our stress during holiday. (COMPOUND)

    BY KE QIN LIM

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    1. Penang is a wonderful place at Peninsular Malaysia and known as Pearl of Orient. (COMPOUND) ✘

      Before this, I just heard from my friends that Penang Island is an interesting place. (COMPLEX) ✘

      Therefore, I want to see with my own eyes. (COMPOUND) ✘

      I went there with my family for three days during last school holiday. (COMPOUND) ✘

      One of the most tourist attraction in Penang is Penang Bridge. (SIMPLE) ✓

      We can see that it is the longest bridge in Asia country. (SIMPLE) ✘

      Then, we continued our journey to Penang Hill. (COMPOUND) ✘

      Penang Hill is the most popular with funicular railway. (SIMPLE) ✓

      I was so excited to try the funicular railway because I never tried it. (COMPLEX) ✓

      On the next day, we visit the Botanical Garden. (COMPLEX) ✘

      We saw a lot of monkey in Botanical Garden. (SIMPLE) ✓

      The monkey is not kept in the cage but they roam freely. (COMPOUND) ✓

      But we cannot give foods to them because it can harm us. (COMPOUND) ✓

      Then, we went to the butterfly farm. (COMPOUND) ✘

      There, we can see many kind of butterflies and their species. (COMPOUND) ✘

      After that, I was really excited especially during lunch time. (COMPLEX) ✘

      Because we know that Malaysia has many races and we can find variety of foods from there races. (COMPOUND) ✘

      In Penang, we can find Malays, Indians and Chinese food but the most popular food in Penang is 'Nasi Kandar' and 'Laksa'. (COMPOUND) ✓

      All these foods are delicious, cheap and easy to find. (COMPOUND) ✘

      As a conclusion, Penang Island is the most interesting place at Peninsular Malaysia and it's good to release our stress during holiday. (COMPOUND) ✘

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  13. A lack of interest in sports and computer and unhealthy eating habits are the major reasons why more and more children are obese these days. (compound sentence) There is a strong correlation between obesity among children and the lack of interest in sports. (simple sentence) Children nowadays display little interest in outdoor activities.(simple sentence) They do not find them interesting.(simple sentence) Furthermore, most of these activities require some form of physical exertion which deters children.(complex sentence) They tend to be lazy and would rather spend their time relaxing indoors.(compound sentence) The lack of participation in sports activities is also linked to the addiction of television and computer.(compound sentence) Moreover, the trend in frequenting fast food outlets has given rise to unhealthy eating habits among children, particularly in major towns and cities. (complex sentence) The fast foods are becoming immensely popular because of the mushrooming of these outlets. (complex sentence) The trend is not to cook at home since both parents working in most families. (complex sentence) They give their children naturally prefer to eat pizzas, burgers and friend chicken.(compound sentence) They manage to persuade their parents to patronize fast food outlets. (simple sentence) More often than not, the food sold is high in fat and carbohydrates and low in fibre. (compound sentence) Little important is placed on serving a balanced meal. (simple sentence)

    BY: CHAN SOK WEE

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    1. A lack of interest in sports and computer and unhealthy eating habits are the major reasons why more and more children are obese these days. (compound sentence) ✘

      There is a strong correlation between obesity among children and the lack of interest in sports. (simple sentence) ✓

      Children nowadays display little interest in outdoor activities.(simple sentence) ✓

      They do not find them interesting.(simple sentence) ✓

      Furthermore, most of these activities require some form of physical exertion which deters children.(complex sentence) ✓

      They tend to be lazy and would rather spend their time relaxing indoors.(compound sentence) ✓

      The lack of participation in sports activities is also linked to the addiction of television and computer.(compound sentence) ✘

      Moreover, the trend in frequenting fast food outlets has given rise to unhealthy eating habits among children, particularly in major towns and cities. (complex sentence) ✘

      The fast foods are becoming immensely popular because of the mushrooming of these outlets. (complex sentence) ✘

      The trend is not to cook at home since both parents working in most families. (complex sentence) ✓

      They think their children naturally prefer to eat pizzas, burgers and friend chicken.(compound sentence) ✘

      They manage to persuade their parents to patronise fast food outlets. (simple sentence) ✓

      More often than not, the food sold is high in fat and carbohydrates and low in fibre. (compound sentence) ✘

      Little important is placed on serving a balanced meal. (simple sentence)✓

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  14. Nowadays, internet is a collection of various services and resources and almost all households have the access to the internet.(complex sentence) It is very functional and convenient for everyone to use it.(compound sentence) The most famous components are e-mail and the world wide web.(simple sentence) From these services and resources, we can find out information within a short period of time. However, the internet brings lots of disadvantages to the modern society. (compound sentence)First and foremost, parents need to have a big concern when their children are using the internet.(complex sentence) When surfing the internet, the children will easily be lured into something dangerous such as the children may receive the pornography online by mistake.(complex sentence) The children may also be exposed to extremely inappropriate material and this will affect the children’s immature mind. So, to keep the children safe, parents must actively guide and guard their children online. Besides, our computers also will also get viruses through internet easily. Some irresponsible people like to send the virus file through the facebook to others and it will destroy our computer’s entire hard disk. Our data and materials will be lost and cannot be opened anymore. So, virus protection is highly recommended. In conclusion, internet has brought out many drawbacks to the society. So, we need to be more alert of the disadvantages of the internet so that we can protect our privacy as well as possible and make it more advantageous to us. (Complex sentence)
    By: Wong Souk Nee

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    1. Nowadays, internet is a collection of various services and resources and almost all households have the access to the internet.(complex sentence) ✘

      It is very functional and convenient for everyone to use it.(compound sentence) ✘

      The most famous components are e-mail and the world wide web.(simple sentence) ✓

      From these services and resources, we can find out information within a short period of time. ?

      However, the internet brings lots of disadvantages to the modern society. (compound sentence) ✘

      First and foremost, parents need to have a big concern when their children are using the internet.(complex sentence) ✓

      When surfing the internet, the children will easily be lured into something dangerous such as the children may receive the pornography online by mistake.(complex sentence) ✓

      The children may also be exposed to extremely inappropriate material and this will affect the children’s immature mind. ?

      So, to keep the children safe, parents must actively guide and guard their children online. ?

      Besides, our computers also will also get viruses through internet easily. ?

      Some irresponsible people like to send the virus file through the facebook to others and it will destroy our computer’s entire hard disk.?

      Our data and materials will be lost and cannot be opened anymore. So, virus protection is highly recommended. ?

      In conclusion, internet has brought out many drawbacks to the society. ?

      So, we need to be more alert of the disadvantages of the internet so that we can protect our privacy as well as possible and make it more advantageous to us. (Complex sentence) ✓

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  15. Last Saturday, nine of my classmates and I was go to the waterfall nearby Muar.(SIMPLE SENTENCE) Early in the morning, it is around 8 o’clock in the morning, I woke up and prepared everything that was needed as towel and clothes.(COMPOUND SENTENCE)
    After that, we were waiting for Adam and Linda to drive the car that we rented because it is far away from our collage to Muar. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) After 30 minutes, they finally came and we go for breakfast first at café near our collage. (COMPOUND SENTENCE)
    After breakfast, we started our journey. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) After one and half hour driving, we finally reached our destination. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) Because the waterfall was no so famous and less people know it. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) So, we are the only tourist at here. (COMPOUND SENTENCE)
    We find a place to put down our bags and start swimming.(COMPOUND SENTENCE) Many of us don’t know how to swim include me.(SIMPLE SENTENCE) So, we just can sat on the cold shallow water to see they swim.(COMPOUND SENTENCE) Suddenly, we hear Linda shouted to cry for help because she cramped her leg.(COMPLEX SENTENCE)
    Adam quickly swan to her and help her to getting up the bank. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) Luckily she was just drunk a few mouth of water. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) But it was really scared us and Linda had been warn that can’t swim at deep place. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) At 3 o’clock, we cleaned up and go back to Collage.(COMPOUND SENTENCE)

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    1. Last Saturday, nine of my classmates and I went to the waterfall nearby Muar.(SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      Early in the morning, it was around 8 o’clock in the morning, I woke up and prepared everything that was needed such as towel and clothes.(COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✓

      After that, we were waiting for Adam and Linda to drive the car that we rented because it was far away from our collage to Muar. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓

      After 30 minutes, they finally came and we went for breakfast first at café near our collage. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✓

      After breakfast, we started our journey. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      After one and half hour driving, we finally reached our destination. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✘

      Because the waterfall was no so famous and less people know it. (COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✘

      So, we were the only tourist here. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      We found a place to put down our bags and started swimming.(COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✓

      Many of us didn’t know how to swim included me.(SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      So, we just could sit on the cold shallow water to see them swimming.(COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      Suddenly, we heard Linda shouted to cry for help because she cramped her leg.(COMPLEX SENTENCE) ✓

      Adam quickly swan to her and help her to getting up the bank. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      Luckily she had just drunk a few mouths of water. (SIMPLE SENTENCE) ✓

      It really scared us and Linda had been warned that she couldn’t swim at deep place. (COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✘

      At 3 o’clock, we cleaned up and went back to Collage.(COMPOUND SENTENCE) ✓

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  16. I have a cute, small, young, white British dog. (simple sentence) It’s name is Victory. (simple sentence) I still can remembered my parents brought it for me as my birthday’s gift when I was 12 years old. (complex sentence) When I came back from school, it will swings its tail look like welcomed me back home. (complex sentence). Victory loves playing with the ball and the both of us spend a lot of time in this games. (compound sentence) Sometimes, it will also accompanies me in my morning walks after having breakfast. (complex sentence) He is very obedient and takes my instructions without any complaints. (compound sentence) Moreover, any stranger who danger to me and it starts barking ferociously to scare him away. (compound sentence) Victory has wonderful toilet habits and loves to be bathed and groomed regularly. (compound sentence) Besides, Victory normally eats vegetarian food like bread and vegetables but once a week, I also will feed it meat. (compound sentence) Victory's presence make my life become more meaningful and wonderful. (simple sentence) It has not only given me a friend to be cared by and to care for, but also has made me a more responsible and mature individual. (compound sentence) I love u, Victory. (simple sentence)

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  17. I have a cute, small, young, white British dog. (simple sentence) ✓

    It’s name is Victory. (simple sentence) ✓

    I still could remember my parents brought it for me as my birthday’s gift when I was 12 years old. (complex sentence) ✓

    When I came back from school, it would swing its tail, welcoming me back home. (complex sentence). ✓

    Victory loves playing with the ball and the both of us spend a lot of time in this game. (compound sentence) ✓

    Sometimes, it will also accompany me in my morning walks after having breakfast. (complex sentence) ✘

    He is very obedient and takes my instructions without any complaints. (compound sentence) ✓

    Moreover, if there is any stranger who poses danger to me, it starts barking ferociously to scare him away. (compound sentence) ✘

    Victory has wonderful toilet habits and loves to be bathed and groomed regularly. (compound sentence) ✓

    Besides, Victory normally eats vegetarian food like bread and vegetables but once a week, I also will feed it meat. (compound sentence) ✓

    Victory's presence make my life become more meaningful and wonderful. (simple sentence) ✓

    It has not only given me a friend to be cared by and to care for, but also has made me a more responsible and mature individual. (compound sentence) ✓

    I love you, Victory. (simple sentence)✓

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  18. Dear students,

    Please have a look at the feedback I've given to all of you. If you have any doubt, feel free to clarify with me. As there are many exercises, I might have overlooked certain aspects, thank you.

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  19. I have a cute small younger brother. (simple sentence) His name is Derrick and he is 6 years old. (compound sentence) Since he was born, my life become more attractive and meaningful because he makes a lot of joyful. (complex sentence) When I am sad, he will go beside me and try to make me happier although he is just a small boy. (complex sentence) He likes to play football so we play football every evening. (compound sentence) Before playing football, he will finish his homework first. (compound sentence) His ambition is to become a football player. (simple sentence) He loves to eat ice-cream and cake. (simple sentence) He knows that I very dote him so he always begs me to buy ice-cream or cake. (compound sentence) He always gives other a smile whenever he sees people walking around because he knows that this a respect for others. (complex sentence) He also like to help people. (simple sentence) He feels happy when he is helping someone who is in suffering. (complex sentence) although sometimes he is very naughty, I still love him very much because he is the only brother or the only siblings that I have. (complex sentence) I believe that he will become a gentleman in the future. (compound sentence)

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  20. Nowadays, there are many accidents in the home. (Simple sentence) Some of the children are injured due to the careless of their parents. (Complex sentence) It is because some of the parents are busy with their business and leave their children alone at home or leave their children at grandparents’ house. (Complex sentence) Hence, there have some precautions of accidents in the home. (Simple sentence) We should know that children are by nature, very curious and will not hesitate to taste any innocent liquid that looks like syrup or water. (Complex sentence) These may turn out to be poisonous or harmful acids or detergents. (Simple sentence) So it is wise to keep medicine well locked up or put them in places well-out-of-reach of children. (Compound sentence) Besides, sharp objects such as knives, scissors and other should never be in the hand of the children.(Simple sentence) Many have been blinked because of the careless moment when the sharp things get into the hand of children.(Complex sentence) Matches, lighters or candles should never be allowed to be in the hands of children, too. (Simple sentence) We should remember that the smallest flame will and can cause the biggest fires. (Compound sentence) With this rules, it is hoped that the number cases of accidents at home will be reduced. (Complex sentence)

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  21. Nowadays, internet is a collection of various services and resources and almost all households have the access to the internet.(compound sentence) It is very functional and convenient for everyone to use it.(simple sentence) The most famous components are e-mail and the world wide web.(simple sentence) From these services and resources, we can find out information within a short period of time.(simple sentence) However, the internet brings lots of disadvantages to the modern society.(simple sentence)First and foremost, parents need to have a big concern when their children are using the internet.(complex sentence) When surfing the internet, the children will easily be lured into something dangerous such as the children may receive the pornography online by mistake.(complex sentence) The children may also be exposed to extremely inappropriate material and this will affect the children’s immature mind.(compound sentence) So, to keep the children safe, parents must actively guide and guard their children online.(compound sentence) Besides, our computers also will also get viruses through internet easily (simple sentence). Some irresponsible people like to send the virus file through the facebook to others and it will destroy our computer’s entire hard disk.(compound sentence) Our data and materials will be lost and cannot be opened anymore. So, virus protection is highly recommended.(compound sentence) In conclusion, internet has brought out many drawbacks to the society. So, we need to be more alert of the disadvantages of the internet so that we can protect our privacy as well as possible and make it more advantageous to us. (Complex sentence)

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